All Comments on 'Sharing a Problem'

by KayPS

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yowseryowserover 4 years ago
Superb

This narrative is a lovely little jewel tucked away in the underbrush of Erotic Couplings. Reflective, perceptive, imaginative, the story turns on itself and excites to a strangely alluring degree. Splendid writing indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Concur

Wholeheartedly agree with Yowser's comments above....Brilliantly executed and descriptive narrative...Will most certainly read more of your stories - 5 stars from me 👍

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A keeper!

Loved it! An erotic story about erotic stories! Very well written, well paced, well worded. I think there's more material about you and James in there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yess!

I loved this! Not only was it hot, but a story most women could probably relate to! I loved that this was different- not the same shit you read over and over again! The girl in me also loved that it was also kind of a love story! Please turn this into a series!!!!

KumquatqueenKumquatqueenabout 4 years ago

Really nice realistic story.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Lovely stories, all of them!

(A little spellcheck would push them just a bit further)

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