by KayPS
This narrative is a lovely little jewel tucked away in the underbrush of Erotic Couplings. Reflective, perceptive, imaginative, the story turns on itself and excites to a strangely alluring degree. Splendid writing indeed.
Wholeheartedly agree with Yowser's comments above....Brilliantly executed and descriptive narrative...Will most certainly read more of your stories - 5 stars from me 👍
Loved it! An erotic story about erotic stories! Very well written, well paced, well worded. I think there's more material about you and James in there.
I loved this! Not only was it hot, but a story most women could probably relate to! I loved that this was different- not the same shit you read over and over again! The girl in me also loved that it was also kind of a love story! Please turn this into a series!!!!
Lovely stories, all of them!
(A little spellcheck would push them just a bit further)