All Comments on 'Sharing a Text with my Big Sister'

Perhaps it should be "Sharing a tent..." rather than "Sharing a text..."?

Even though I think you could have stopped two paragraphs earlier I enjoyed your story. Thinking of the missed opportunities with my brother makes me wet.

You have a typo in the Title of this story...

One star. If you can't get the title correct...........

Great story!

The title of this comment says it all.

An unbelievable start to your story - TEXT? instead of Tent? Your instead of you're???

Did not begin to read because of this.

Not a good way to start a story.

Are u from NZ I've been to those places you said they are in the top of the South

You really need to proof read your work. You seem to leave out a lot of important descriptive info. What does our sis look like?

It's called a 'cock up'. 46% of the population have one from time to time and about 54% of the population want one from time to time.

Also very funny that all of the negative comments come from people that have never published anything....................wonder why that is?

They just go straight to the sex with no build up at all.

Just take the criticism and don't whine about it.

Its based on a real account and that's just the way it happened. The original script was rejected by the powers that be so this is an abbreviated cut down version and missed out a lot of background information. The age for consensual sex is 16 in NZ, in Literotica it is 18. The real world doesn't always work like a piece of fiction.

Title should be sharing a "tent".... not text

I enjoyed the story. So you had a typo in the title--big f***ing deal. I would love to hear about your erlier experiences with your sister. I get it that Literotica won't let you publish under 18 sex. How about if you make yourself and your sister each a couple of years older to satisfy the censors. Keep on writing.

He was talking to his sister. Next sentence said they fucked. No build up. Worst story ever

At least it's more original than your one line, stolen straight out of the Simpsons.

This guy is complaining about "keyboard warriors", yet is claiming all of these (clearly fabricated) stories actually happened. This is a fiction site, not a roleplaying site. Learn the difference.

Someone is clearly pretty insecure, not only about their (misspelled and honestly very poor) stories, but also their (likely non-existent) sex life. I'm sure they'll just call me a "troll" like they do anyone with anything remotely negative to say about them or their stories. Kindly fix your attitude or move on to another place.

I haven’t actually got a sister lol but I’ve been to that camp ground in Mapua Golden Bay. Very nice.

A lot of significant issues. You really need to take the advice of other commenters here before trying again.