All Comments on 'Sharing Candy Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
'You' vs. name

I tend to skip stories (also this one) when a person appears to consequently be called 'you' instead of a name.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
second person

I agree and I generally dislike second person narratives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
OK

You or not you, I enjoyed the story. Well written and erotic. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

That was amazing! I can’t wait to read part 2! My dick is rock hard, desperately needy! Do you squirt in real life? - Radio

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