All Comments on 'Sharing Mum's Bed'

Loved how the story developed. Keep these stories coming.

Exciting story and well written.

Nice story AAAA++++

I loved this story and would like you to continue. If you continue, have dot and jack get pregnant and have the baby. I dislike some of your story ending. You talk about getting people pregnant and stop. I feel like some people would like you to finish your stories. Of course it is only my opinion.

Also, this characters mother is on the pill have it not work and all three women get pregnant at the same time.

This was a fantastic, well developed story. Would love to read more of this story line. Possibly a household with the four of them together. Thank you!

Terrific build up for this loving story. Yes you should continue with Sal and Dot and his mum.

5 stars

impregnate the mother as well !

Your best work in awhile. You put detail into the narrative. I like that you are now allowing comments. A sequel is a must. Good luck

I'd love to read the follow-up with Dot & Sal !!!!!!!!

Good job. I love how dreamy the beginning is because you do not go into character's emotions too deeply: this distance gives it a very surreal but appealing atmosphere.

That was an amazing story

An excellent story, really enjoyed reading it and would like to see you do a second chapter.

Thanks for sharing. 5*****

Would enjoy the story line continuing

Great job. Please continue with the series.

Great story and a fun read. Thanks for sharing.

5stars,,,, i like your stories... and please more more chapters

Next chapter should begin where you left off but once he is introduced to dot and Sal let him experience them individually and then together

Great story but it definitely needs the additional friends included. Please do so.

Great stories Jack, thanks. Keep e'm cumming.

Oh yes, please continue. Your stories are never long enough.

Oh yes, please continue. A lot left untold on this one....

This would be hotter if you'd spent more effort on the emotions and sex and less on the intricacies of outside relationship dynamics. One of the things I hate most about the group category is having to keep track of multiple sets of one-dimensional characters and their names. Mother-son affairs are usually hot and the pregnancy possibility then lactation can be hot to explore but extra people, especially other males just ruin the fantasy. I can normally just skim past all the anal nastiness but you seem to revel in that pretty hard too. Needs serious proofreading too so 2/5 only.