All Comments on 'Sharing Susan Ch. 01'

Very erotic. Keep sharing...

Good luck with the divorce when she loses respect for her husband being a perverted cuck!

Thank you for sharing this very sexy post. Nice job. I look forward to reading more from you. :)

with no actual cheating - but the changes from present to past tense made the telling a bit disjointed at times.

My bad for not reading the tags. 1*

should have to post warnings!!!

Keep writing!

Gee...Hubby is NOT wearing tight, lacy bra and panties and 'cleaning up' after Sweetie's most recent conquest. They think they are alone in the motel, and get surprised when someone else comes out to the hot-tub. Hubby is surprised that he enjoys watching another man admiring Sweetie (and Sweetie enjoying being watched!) The married couple have sex (after a long dry phase), then they talk about what in this episode excited each of them so much. Sweetie goes out and flirts more aggressively then comes back in for more hot, married sex.

Hubby is now a cuckold because he enjoys the thought? Can we, please, at least admit that he is not a dyed-in-the-wool cuck eating cream-pies while wearing a cock-restraint!

Hoping Susan takes it a bit farther the next time!!! Great writing... Can't wait for part 2!!!

This was a great start for Susan, I'm sure the next time she wil be bolder and she will want to please her husband even more. She's aroused knowing how much her flirting and exposure arouses him. He wants to encourage her to open up and is ready to meet another stranger who will take his wife.

Hoping it won't devolve into predictable: (1) husband becomes humiliated cuke, (2) husband ends up angry/vengeful, (3) couple splits.

Find him. Invite him over. Tell us what happens. I'm so wet thinking about what cums next.

Jo

Your story was Flirty fun and sounds like the work of two teenagers playing truth or dare. You both are obviously in love and obviously adults and confident in your relationship with eachother so why not play. I'm not a fan of cuckold relationships but I believe we are entitled to enjoy life as we please. As long as the teasing involved I feel I myself could be comfortable as if I were Susan's betrothed. The story was well written very erotic and playful and fun. I had no idea where it was going.

I love how they are exploring this sexy moment together. I look forward to chapter 2.

What cums next in a good story?

Good story, and pitched just about right. Too many stories simply go too far too quickly.

When is Ch. 02 coming out?

Congratulations!!!

Phrases like 'Stop, I said' need to be punctuated as

"Stop," I said. - rather than - "Stop, I said".

It is disconcerting and interrupts the reader's focus on the progress of the tale!

Hubby's awakening to the sensuality inherent in his Sweetie's desirability is nicely described, and his awkwardness in reconciling, and then describing, it to himself and, more, to her is engaging.

4*

1 Star.

Cannot wait to read more, thank you.. 5 stars .

See OOAA down there, so this has to be cuck shit.