All Comments on 'Sharing Zander'

Reading this is like wading through mud. Your prose style is opaque to the point of incomprehensibility.

And about as erotic as a heavy cold.

This my first time writing anything like this. Thanks for your opinion and I agree I have a lot to work on when it comes to writing in this specific genre.

What is SVT?

SVT = Supraventricular tachycardia

... which is "-an abnormal heart rhythm arising from improper electrical activity of the heart. It is a type of rapid heart rhythm-" and "-Someone experiencing this ... may feel the heart rate accelerate from 60 to 200 beats per minute or more-"

Which means she got very, very, VERY excited...