All Comments on 'Sharkbait Ch. 16-20'

it's a great story as always. I wonder (as my comment title says) how Amy will react to the project progress and her own recovery and her mate etc. Its rapidly evolving and getting good

I love how detailed and intricate your stories are! At this point I’m only on the site for your stories!!

Love the story but what about her mate if u r going that far with this one . Ofcourse and what about more from Amy too

Loved the installment! I just hope this won't be a case of 'friend wakes up from medical coma as evil twin' sort of thing. Amy is cool, I hope she doesn't have too many lasting effects (it is fantasy, right? Some unbelievable stuff is acceptable; besides, just hand wave it as werewolf healing or something). Still love your work and hope you keep writing for a long time to come

Your writing was excellent as always so keep the story going and thank you for a great read!

"I was going to eat myself into a meat coma" We all need to do that on occasion. My son loves to grill and he did his best on Father's Day to make that meat coma dream come true. I love that your characters are so relatable to real-life, it makes the story fun to read.

Love your writing!!

This is great on to the next one.

Still a good story. I don't find the overall speed at which stuff happens and is made to work to be quite plausible.