by partwolf
Oh this was horribly terrific! I half wish they got a harsher sentence but why waste the oxygen on the likes of them. I hope Amy gets her sight back and she can swim again with her mate and bestie and of course our Sharkbait gets the true happiness she deserves in her life
You are such a great writer and you build and build up the tension. I absolutely LOVED it!
I had stopped following you after reading the first page of the blood curse. I am squeamish about a few things, actual rape (this story does not have a graphic description) and hate crimes/religious crimes.
But I came back and found the last chapter. And then I was checking every single day, even though you usually post after 15 to 18 days. And I glad I checked.
"It's a story that belongs among the trashy teenage werewolf books on Wattpad." Heh, love it when an author can make fun of himself. It shows confidence.
Please don't end it there please continue the story to a great finale with a cherry on top
At this point do I need to say more? One or two minor grammatical errors (a strangely repeated 'of' on the first page comes to mind, if I recall correctly) do not detract from the story as a whole. As others have said: good riddance to the guilty parties and I hope that Amy regains her sight.
Amazing!
Sharks with FRIKKIN laser beams...I practically peed myself at that line.
Can't wait for the day each series is made into a movie!!!
Hmm. Attaching super strong rare earth magnets to an animal that hunts by sensing weak magnetic fields. Probably not the best option. Great story other than that.
"Occam's Razor is a rule stating the obvious answer is usually the correct one"
What does the wikipedia page on it says ?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Occam%27s_razor