All Comments on 'Sharkbait Down Under Ch. 21-30'

I expected them to end up being kidnapped but not with the help of Lawrence

You did it again. Nice way to keep story going. I await the next chapters.

More asap new twist is great but lots of killing should be going on soon too

Dead man walking, but probably not for long.

Amazing as per usual. Please post again soon!!!!!

I get so into the story that when the part (chapters) is done, I so want to read the next one. Have read everything you've currently have posted and love all of it. Thanks.

Of course the only bad part is that we have to be patient to wait for more!

What an amazing action packed instalment, edge of the seat stuff. Aw, Lawrence is a very silly man I must admit I wasn’t surprised at all that he was the front man for this. He helped Leo in the past but this is something else entirely......because they’re only females.

Revenge will be well and truly frosty! Looks like it’s time to clean house in the American Council, dragging them kicking and screaming into the 21st century.

Thanks for the amazing update to Sharkbait’s story.

Tess (UK)

Lawrence was the twist I didn't see coming. False trail, perhaps?

Wow, what an exciting, cliff hanging ending to this chapter. Can't wait until your next chapter arrives! You are truly one of the best authors on this site. I hope you and my other fav's will continue writing non-human stories forever! There are truly very few good ones anymore let alone great ones! (my personal opinion of course--and you know what they say about opinions)

sweetone66

Right!? I agree left field on the one but gooooooood story!

I Hate You! LOL. Damn good chapter and such a cliffhanger! Is Lawrence doing this against his will? Has he gone bad? What is going to happen to the girls? What will the Mexican vampire want in exchange for his help? So many questions. I hope the next chapter comes out soon!

A lot of your readers/fans are talking about Lawrence. My guess is that he is being pressured into his act of betrayal... of course I have been known to be wrong before and that could be the case here. But I just can't imagine why a previously honorable and otherwise trusted friend would participate in this terrible act!

sweetone66

Thank you PW for another good chapter and answering my Vampire questions. You have once again set up an interesting framework for Sharksbait's new pack and having Lawrence deliver the Council's demands was also totally believable. But, having him betray his friends with the kidnapping opens a whole new angle to this saga. I wonder just what the Council has on him? Thank you again for my Sharkbait fix and I hope it will hold me until your next posting.

ELS

All of your writing on this site has been more than worth the time spent reading but the series about Vicki and her family have been especially wonderful. Can't wait to see how she and her team get out of this situation but I guess I'll have to...hopefully not too long.

Please keep going this story just gets better and better. You are an extremely talented writer x

Another great story by Partwolf as usual. I can't wait for the next chapter

Great chapter

This girl's life is anything but boring.

I think Lawrence is being framed.

Why bleach the place but leave his scent on the collar?

But I might be wrong.

Can not wait for the next installment.

I can’t believe you left us with a major cliffhanger and no follow-up chapters. I am excited to see what’s next. I would pay to read this as a book. I can’t wait for the next chapters to be released. Please release them soon, I would love to know what’s happening with the characters. Honestly Fiona, has suffered enough, she should be out for blood. Overall amazing story line.

Holly shit you did it again, but damn give then a break.love your stuff