by azintruder
azintruder...just ignore all the negative "anonymous" comments.
Please continue to write for your fans! We need more of your works. Thank You!
Was very good. Hope that they all move in together. Jillian still get to fuck him with her mom and without her mom.
I got tired of sec from reading this story. There was no point to anything. What was the point to this story other than sex? It had potential with the guy being used and her ending back up with Robert. Nothing. And then the dialog went. It's like a virgin was writing this story 1 star.
I think Jillian is a piece of shit. Using Dave as a backup if things didn't work out with Robert. Her and Robert won't last more then a year, she is a cheating slut. Hope Dave stays with Sharon for a while she is a better fuck then her daughter any way and much more honest. Dave is an okay guy for putting up with the deception, I would have told her to go to hell fast. I also would have told Robert how she used him, see how he handles it. I hope that you write a followup to this and let us know how things work out. Go Dave
Overall one amazing story! Lots of great detailed sex, and some unexpected twists, just overall a great story!