All Comments on 'Shattered Secret'

The best story I have read in a lon-n-n-n-g-g-g-g- time!

He should have sold her on the open market into a life of being used with no pay in a bordello somewhere out of the way. She would have done well until either drugs, diseases, or abuse killed her. Who knows she might have lasted two or three years.

Hot concept. Hot sex. Well written and suspensful. Great twist at the end.

tantalising to the last and especially the twist at the end..... nice one, GA!

Superb yet again Mr Appleby.....another twist in the tale....never quite know where you're going but so happy to be along for the ride xx

I loved how the characters' personalities changed as the story progressed. It was quite different from what I thought it would be at the beginning. Thank you for an unusual and gripping story.

Definitely an interesting plot. I did not expect the unusual twists in the story and the different ending. I wish you hadn't ended the story so abrubtly and continue the conversations between the daugher and her father. Perhaps another short chapter will help bring closure to my mind.

A great story.

Well you know how I feel about your writing GA....Absolutely superb...more...more....more

..and nasty with a well fleshed story.

Good stuff!

I loved the surprise naughty ending for a very hot and well written story!! I will read others and look forward to it..love the stories dealing with mature men..very sexy

Well done!

Thanks, ohio

Great, as usual.

Just fyi,

It should be "full rein" like riding a horse, not like ruling a kingdom.

T.

Another great read, I like how you write,