by cyberlookur
Great story, very well written. Nice to see a story that actually seems plausible. Great buildup!
You have certainly left the door open to 3 or 4 sequels and the quality of the story certainly merits them.
Your story was very believable and I enjoyed it to climax. I liked the way you described Linda's large breasts. Very nice.
this needs another chapter, wow it was very nicely written