All Comments on 'She Hates Me? Not! Pt. 01: Monica'

Enjoyed this story very much. You have piqued my interest as to where this storyline could go in the future. Looking forward to more.

Keep it going you got my attention

Keep it up I had a great time reading this. I hope that mom gets involved soon.

5 stars !!!!!!!!!!

Great start to a new series. I'm so excited about all the new ones you're righting these days.

Very nicely done. Light yet hot to keep readers interested

Liked the tone...the humor...all of it!!! Waiting for part 2 and 3 when he gets her ass and her mother...and her ass too..LOL!!!

This was great, can't wait to see future installments. Let's see the lead taking her ass then her mothers. It be nice to close it out with one or both of them ending up or making it a competition to see who gets pregnant first

I do think you have a very good story going please continue with it I what to see what the others will be like

This was hilarious and hot at the same time, unexpectedly brilliant! It sounds like you were having as much fun writing as we were reading.

Loved the characters, loved the story. Leaves me rock hard and wanting more!

Great story. Will be reading all of this series. Keep writing!

You have left out some important details brother. Top down (car) and bent over the back seat worth every penny, what year and model. Randy Newman's song,"crusin down Imperial Hwy big nasty red head at my side, we were born to ride".

Good pacing, good leadup, Interesting Characters.

Keep up the good work.

Both myself and Beulah really enjoyed this, the humour and the sexy bits, up to your usual standard, we just hope that mum gets well fucked too.

Loved it. Very hot. The sex was great and the possibility of a mother/daughter threesome, awesome!!

"They all wanted to know if her breasts were as soft as they appeared to be, but I don't motorboat and tell." Lol.

I'm liking the series very much so far.

But a bit quick..... know the cougars out there move fast but hummmm..... Monica??? and carried it for two years?? Then gave it up after a couple of hours....

Monica seems to be the sexual soul that most women or young ladies suppress way too long to let escape..."youth is often times wasted on the young."

The idea of a mother and daughter being in competition is always exciting. I knew a couple of mothers who fitted the figure in the story.

Just read this one again. Im curious to know what stories youre working on at the moment?

Everyone needs breaks and i get it but if any are in the works im wondering what we can look forward to. Good luck

Glad to see you eventually got her.

... a 2 year grudge from a girl for one accidental boob grab during tackle football, AND continuing after she became a slut makes ZERO sense. Girls, even virgin girls, don't hold grudges over accidents like that. She would have forgotten about it mostly before the day was over. I would have enjoyed more exploration and explanation of why she hated him in highschool.

AMAZING!!!! One hell of a story.

Great story and setup so far~ My favorite line was " but I don't motorboat and tell." Laughed out loud at that.

Really sexy. I so loved this, hard all the way through.

The author takes a simple story and turns it into an enjoyable quick read. Gotta love the co-ed football and the motorboating joke.

THANKS

Fun story

Excellent piece of erotic writing - worth and awarded a 5. Thank you for your gift ..... ... T

Dam this one needs more chapters for sure.

WOW! Nice.

Have I told you I like your style? Bring on Karly. Next chapter, they marry and live with Karly as a throuple with kids.

If it is her birthday,how come she is sat on her own?

Who would now want to apologize to a sexy classmate years later and then have sex with the same? The mother sounds like a cougar with sights on her daughter’s classmate.