All Comments on 'She Painted Up Her Face Ch. 02'

Good story!

5

That the end?

bit rushed but very good story.

This story is well written, but very different to your usual tales. This was not to my personal taste, but you cannot please everyone, every time.

I look forwards to your next, perhaps with a little more of your usual light humour.

The end felt just a little rushed, but overall a very well written and interesting story.