All Comments on 'She Thinks, He Thinks'

Gave up after a thirdf6f6bd way through the first page

Couldn't follow that crap at all!

I came at this very differently to see if I could pull it off. Maybe not. I like the idea of just the idea. Any aspects of this that DID work?

I liked it. Really good read.

Writers biggest problem, according to me, is conversation. You know, to get each person "sound" different. Here you write two conversation, albeit it's in the head of the mother and son. To me, they sounded too alike.

Gave up after about a 1/4 of the first page.

That feedback about voices is incredibly helpful. I think that captures the challenge perfectly. The voices in my head were distinct, but that's because I had the "curse of knowledge." Thanks for that perspective.

Its greatly different... but darn... it was great.

And nice! I hope you continue...

GAH! It cut off too early!

Interesting way to write! I liked it! But it could have gone on to the next stage! lol

Interesting but don't do it again.