All Comments on 'She used to be Innocent Ch. 04'

Another chapter soon please

I hope you update soon

Waiting for next story!

Is there more to this story or an ending? Or just another unfinished story? I am glad your are a mediocre story teller and not my doctor, I'd be dead.

Hey, readers! This is not another unfinished story. I had to go through a few changes in my life that took quite a lot of energy out of me. Because of that, I haven't really had the time or strength to write, but I'm back! Hopefully I'll be able to produce one chapter a week, but even if I can't, more will be coming. I'm actually writing Ch. 05 now.

Take care of yourself & know we still want to know how the story ends.

This story really deserves to be finished, I can't wait for Lily to get an upper hand over this bastard. He needs to grovel and grovel and grovel...

This is exactly my type of story. So well written and hot I would love at least one more part please please!!!!

I hope that you continue this story. Thank you for these four chapters.

-g

1 star

YOU RUINED ANAL SEX FOR ME

YOU MADE ANAL A PAIN ANAL

I FELT LIKE CRYING WHEN YOU NARRATED THAT BRUTAL SNAL SCENE

NO LUBE/OIL,NO ANAL PLAY,NO DILATION

HAVE YOU EVER HAD ANAL SEX IN YOUR LIFE EVER

THIS IS NOT ANAL SEX

THATS ANAL SADISM

RAMMING HIS COCK STRAIGHT INTO UNTRAINED AND TOTALLY DRY ASS

HOW COME SHE NOT BLEED ?

HOW COME SHE NOT FELT PAIN DURING AND AFTERWARDS

HE DIDNT PREPARED HER

HE JUST RAMMED IN

ITS NOT HER PUSSY ITS HER ASSHOLE

HOW CAN YOU BE SO IGNORANT ABOUT ANAL SEX

SHE IS A PETITE AND HE HAS A MONSTERCOCK

HOW COME SHE IS ALIVE ?

I DONT EXPECT ANY MERCY FROM HIM

BUT ATLEAST MAKE ANAL SEX REALISTIC AND LESS PAINFUL

IT SEEMS LIKE A GUY HAS WRITTEN THIS ANAL INSTEAD OF A WOMAN

GOD YOU MAKE ME PUKE

I REALLY HATE IT WHEN LITEROTICA WRITERS ARE SO IGNORANT ABOUT ANAL

SHE DIDNT FELT ANY PAIN AFTER ANAL

HE DIDNT ASK IF SHE WAS HURTING

YOU GET USED TO ANAL ONLY IF YOU USE SOME LUBERICANT

OTHETWISE SHE MIGHT DIE OF RECTAL BLEEDING

SHE IS A HUMAN RIGHT?

OR I AM READING SOME SCI FI AND SHE IS SOME NONHUMAN WITH HER ASSHOLE SELF LUBERCATING AND ELASTIC AS A HUMAN PUSSY

1 STAR REALLY NEVER HATED ANY ANAL NARRATION EVER LIKE THIS