by EllenMelville
I was interested to see what ratings you received for this one. I thought it would not score well as I could imagine a treatise on disfigured breasts, albeit with a fairy tale ending, generating some really low scores. Rather surprised at the current 4.37 average. Maybe Lit readers are more sophisticated than I give them credit for. Or did the usual purveyors of ultra low scores simply not get past the title? I admit that I would probably have not proceeded far if your name had been unfamiliar.
Though well written, and I again mention your quirky style, it was not a high scorer erotic-wise with me. Life long prejudices die hard. It did however rate highly in the feel-good stakes, if indeed this was your aim.
I love hearing from you, Anon. I wrote this because it was a real experience. I tried to sex it up, but this girl had had a pin stuck in her balloons by an incompetent surgeon. Not only that, but I admit, I imagine a happy ending. So far, there is not.