All Comments on 'She was Right'

Bit too sugary for me.

I don't know about others, but I really enjoyed this!! Maybe being retired military colored my perception but it was a great read!! DerMtMan

Black bitch Shanna was so over the top. Fucking waste of time

7 pages for a cheating slut

One of my favorite stories by you. Like how he handled a very bad situation.

Like it - people stories are my favs!!

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Great read. Always enjoy ur stories.

Thanks for sharing.

Another excellent story by one of the best authors on this site⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

What is there to say that I and others haven't constantly said - a great story! I wouldn't change a thing. Thank you Q. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

"Does it look like I'm running?"

==≈=> great line. Glad he and Shanna hooked upa.nd married. Charlene was a piece of work. Wonder why it took so long to become a serial cheater? Surprised he tried to make it work with her after her first multimonth affair and her threats, etc. She was delusional. Guess she was addicted to illicit sex. Sounds like the sex with Bob beyond the thrill of the secret affair, wss actually mediocre compared to what she used to have with the MC. Charlene really blew some fuses in her brain and ruined her life. Hard to imagine she will ever be happy. The daughters slowly disentangle themselves from her with time. She is now in some special "open" marriage. Doubt sex will make up for lost live and family and shared memories of a happy past. She is a self destructive with mental issues. Shanna was a fun character. Disturbing though to see some commenters on here who spout their racist gobbledygook on this forum. There is no place for that in a civilized society. He ended up happy with Shanna and had two more wonderful daughters. Was funny how he kept giving jobs to the ex wives of the guys that Charlene was parking, destroying their marriages. Have to agree with prior commenter. Why didnshe just divorce somewhere on oage 1 when he refused to accede. Btw does that trick of living in the basement post divorce, actually happen? Seems unlikely.

Creative story, but why doesn't she just divorce him on the first page and get everything she wants. In no fault state she will get alimony, part of his business, the kids, child support and use of the house til her youngest is 18. Yes she is an execrable bitch. But once the MC plays his many shenanigans with credit cards, surveillance, open marriage counter threats, the cell phone that can only call les than 10 phone numbers, why not just file for divorce? She clearly doesn't love him anymore. Odd. Of course without this mistake on her part, the rest if the story doesn't happen.

Great story by brilliant author.

A great story, originally gave it 5/5, it’s still a 5

Thank you

A life well lived is the best revenge.

Great story. Thanks for sharing

Very good story, I enjoy how the characters are written. Even though the stories are different the main characters “men” have a similarity that make you feel you know them.

Thanks for writing.

Very well written story and told magnificently……():\

I don't think that the category is important other than the comments. A good story is a good story, fictional or otherwise. I enjoyed your tale.

Another well written enjoyable story. Thoroughly good read thanks for that. I tried hard not to type this ne t bit but feel I need to say this. To the Anonymous comment below saying about the bit with the black woman was unnecessary....... whoever you are please understand that you're a racist bigoted twit and you should be ashamed of yourself. Sorry it needed to be said. BardnotBard

Portrays Jack as a very laid back man. Too easily controlled.

Nice but hurried towards the end with confusing flow.

Well done again!

But what about the cats? You have no CATS in your story! Pontoon boats, yes, but what about poor cats left at home with only drapes and seat cushions to sharpen claws with? Howszat for an agenda? Cats! In California they’re better known as Tender Vittles to lost doggies (coyotes)….

This is almost getting boring saying how great your works are…. I’m almost sick a Moon Pies… Nuther 10 on the five scale. Off to da next story. I wonder if it’ll have evil womeneze in the plot?….

Great story

Not bad, good plot that had just that bit of a twist in it.

2nd reading for me and another 5 star story from you. thanks

It's only my opinion, but I found this story, yes, it is a story only , to be quite an enjoyable read. No nit-picking no bull-sh*t, just a good 5* story.

Great story.

I scanned over a lot of unnecessary parts specially towards the end with the black woman but I enjoyed the first half of it.

I think there was a decent story buried in there, but all of the excessive "rambling" as you call it made it a less pleasing read. In fact, if I didn't know this was a free site, I would swear you were getting paid by the word.

One of your best

As before I think these wives couldn’t be that stupid in real life. 5 stars again.

Bill S.

A reread enjoyed it as much or more. Kind of funny but I feel like I really got to know the characters, and really, really like some of them.

Very good, 5 stars, as most of your stories are. Liked the "operation Lake" and combat boots at the wedding, especially 9 Bridesmaids. LOL. Best was the Separation paper and separate apartment in the basement, smooth move, Oh, the engine cut out on her car.

In a no-fault state, which we're led to believe this one is, she could just divorce HIM and get everything his attorney told him she'd get. The rest of the story was just a fantasy.

Never read this one of yours before. I just loved it.

Thank you….. 5/5

A beautifully crafted tale. 5 stars !! Whatever category this story ended up in is inconsequential. Oftentimes, an entity cannot be defined by a single label.

A beautifully crafted tale. 5 stars !! Whatever category this story ended up in is inconsequential. Oftentimes, an entity cannot be defined by a single label.

As usual

Well-written, within standard outlines. I thought Charlene was pretty unexplained, though and it seemed as though there should be an explanation, because she didn't quite make sense a normal enough wife for years, who falls, still seems to want the marriage relationship actually, but then can't restraint herself. I suppose that given the anti-wife contempt that is the apparent baseline of the readers here, it works for most of them just to say, in effect, 'oh, she was another carelessly irrational dumb woman which a lot of them are (instead of being human beings or something like that.). But I thought she was odd enough for there to be a little explanation, myself. Probably wouldn't be all that satisfactory, and I certainly would not have wanted to read another 'gosh she's been manic-depressive all her life, but it never produced anything noticeable until now, how about that.'

Fantastic story! Bravo!

Grrreaaaate. Damn, I wish I could put words to paper like you can. Wonderful Job.Thanks bunches.

Decent story.

LOL - Charlene (who as per author was 3 steps ahead in thinking) threatened the protagonist with divorce and taking him to cleaners but didn't actually do it as soon as he started troubling her.

A good story, but it could use some payback on all the cheaters.

Great. Good charter build up.

No such thing as a good story that's too long or a poor story that's too short. Keep it up as long as you can (writing is hard work). Your usual top marks, Q.

NO surprise! Another 5! Great read.

Over 11 years and still putting out some of the best stuff on the site.

5 stars for a decent fantasy story

Excellent and perfect confirmation that a slut will never learn and will always be a slut (Charlie). It is ingrained in the genes. This story hold our attention constantly until we finish reading it.

Please have a GOOD editor review your writings. Thx

5*

BJ

A very well written, and a very interesting story. I too wondered why it wasn’t in LW and have to agree about toxic.

Sicher eine lange, aber definitiv keine langweilige Geschichte. Es war ein Vergnügen den zahlreichen Wendungen zu folgen.

Long drawn out story of a whore wife, a slut Shanna in the wings and the drama

I must say that this story would benefit greatly from a rewrite/ editors hand, with all the misspelling and just general bad grammar but that doesn’t change the fact it is a great story, with the father actually being calm for the most part, not trying to burn down everything around him in a revenge trip, and keeping his girls futures in mind with his actions. Great story

I liked this story. My favorite Loving Wives stories are actually the ones where the best revenge is living well.

I can see the appeal in BTB stories, but most of the time those stories are not practical or legal.

Really fucking good story and i love how he didnt keel over and was suoer smart about it.

For fucks sake he pissed around for fucking years doing who the fuck knows videoing and taping his wife to absolutely no good end? And then of course he overpays through the ass because why the hell not? And then of course the love of his life Shanna he makes her wait for literally years for him to stop fucking around with his whore wife who he's happily fucking again WTF this is cuckporn plain and simple.

It just went in circles. I skipped the last 2 pages. Thanks for yet another "millionaire lives the good life while making his ex wealthy" story anyway. You do know that the secret to a great story is to get the reader to relate? How many multi millionaires do you think read your stories? The average Joe doesn't really care.

Great sex is important in married life. Good for him and his new bride. Nice story.

Mighty fine story

The way the characters were introduced made it a short read. It held my interest throughout and went fast.

I couldn’t believe the wife was so stupid

After getting caught once & seeing the results you’d have thought anyone with half a brain would have realized how lucky they were & quit fucking around.

Sheesh!

Bill S.

The story is quite good. Not long at all. I love the characters. The shallowness of Bev is overwhelmed by the virtues of the other characters. It's sad that scheming of the cheaters had to be outdone so we'll.

A solid 5 star. Easy to read, I loved it from start to finish. Thanks!

ANOTHER STORY WHERE THE SLUTS ARE WAITING TO SINK THEIR TEETH IN TO A FREE MAN!!

Noticed a few type's. Nothing I could not over read. Thanks for writing.

Really enjoyed the story.

Ed

This is my first time with this one! A very good story, Q!

I've read this thing several times, and have enjoyed it every single time! Thanks for sharing...

I'm going through all of Q's stories. Amazing creativity shows in every one.

Damn fine story!

I really enjoyed this one. It showed the journey from marriage, through cheating, and cheating again, and through the divorce. The emotions felt real from both the husband and his kids. Well done! Can't wait to read another from you.

I am amazed at the way people criticize the way a story is told. He/she should have done this or that.

Criticism should point out disconnects, spelling, grammatical errors or other flaws. Not rewrite the story.

Several times the word “to” became “tot”.

I found the story a little hard to follow at times, but will give it 5 because over all, as with most of your submissions, I really liked it.

Loved the story. I read it out loud to my wife, while she played an online game with our grown children. Interesting thing about reading out loud, errors pop out. Usually misspellings.

I may make a list on the next story I read.

Excellent,one of your best.

A rambling dumb story.

Loved it, well done, 5 stars, Just saying

I enjoy rambling tales. Not reality but escaping reality is why I read literotica.

Mike the Irishman 🍀

Not sure the story makes any sense. He's petrified of what happens in a divorce. Yet, he pisses her off relentlessly. Why wouldn't she file? What am I missing?

Great story! Charlie proved she was nothing but a whore when she kept lying and he nearly took her back. That bitch should have not been a stay-at-home mom. Should have taken HER to the lake, get her drunk and she falls overboard. THEN, try to save her, THROW HER AN ANCHOR! Shanna and he made beautiful chocolate babies, and Charlie's still a slut

Anonymous from 10 days ago was at least when she lead her comment with 'this is dumb'. After reading the rest I have to agree, THIS IS DUMB ( the comment that is)! . . . . Great story as always Q. Its nice knowing that before you begin that it will be enjoyable.5 stars - second time through

somewhere east of Omaha

This is dumb. Men are not monarchs, they cannot just wave their hand and decide the wife will abide by dumb posturing. Here is the chunnel sized plot hole in the story: when the husband tells her to get a job, why didn't the bitch just divorce him and take him for all she could get? The author already defined her as a sociopath.

I swear the men that write these stories are delusional. They think they have some magic power where their words mean law other than jack squat. All you infant misogynists who get off on this story, sack up because regardless of how alpha you think you are, it's not up to you. It's up to the courts. Maybe you can write a story about being a super solider like saddletramp to help you sleep at night.

Another great one! Thanks!

It was well written and enjoyable

I’m a big fan of all you write

Great story, a great fun to read. I was especially amused by the carpet gag and how qhml1 topped the first punch line. Great stuff.

THANKS

Great story, AAA+++

A nice comfortable read.

Definitely one for the BTB trolls. The one thing that is unbelievable in the story that having gone through the pain and loneliness she went through after her first cheating episode that she would cheat again. It would have read better without the reconciliation section. No women is that terminally stupid at least not without putting in some safeguards to protect herself the second time around.

There are plenty of places on this site where a reader can find a stroke story. It's a pleasure to read something substantial and well-written. 5 stars

see above

Too many times authors become focused on the details of the sex and forget about a good plot. I am 78 years young and quickly lose interest in a story that is mostly about the details of the sex involved. Thank you for a story with a good plot and just enough sex to make the story more interesting. I suspect that this is the most difficult, and for some impossible to write. Thank you for one of the best. 5*

The infamous JPB said it best, I write to please myself. While I use anonymous as well, I add a tag line to avoid being confused with others. We all have assholes but writers, with their way with words, have named theirs - ANONYMOUS !!!! As always I loved your story Q.

somewhere east of Omaha

very good story, the ex proved the tiger never changes their spots, surprise, surprise when he thought everything was going well until true friends spoke up. Once a cheater...................

Good storey and just so you know I like them long and non-erotic

Enjoyed it.

I'm sure you'll agree that there are a lot of self-serving assholes out there that the only thing they can do is complain ant tell you what you should have written. I don't write for Literotica, but I sure get pissed off every time I read those types of reviews. What's worse, they don't have the balls to leave their comments except as anonymous. Truly, we should be thanking you for such a good story 5 STARS CC

Why does everyone analyse, dissect and over state every story on this site? It was well written, well plotted and different from the usual hackneyed grab all the money and post her videos on the web tripe usually offered. All that, and it was free.

5 stars from me. keep up the good work.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Very good story. I don’t feel it was too long. I’m sure others have a different opinion. Thank you for sparing us the intimate details of her cheating.

What nice story, made even better wuth your gift of being a great story teller...

As for your comment about Loving Wifes,

"it's a little toxic right now "

that is the understatement of the year...

LW has been toxic for years!

5*****s

SOS

Loved it. An easy 5 stars

Love your stories man keep writing

I have seen a lot of stories like this and they really don't make sense because they are based on a faulty assumption. The husband wants to save his assets so he doesn't file. How exactly does that stop the wife from taking him to the cleaners? It is a well written story but you can drive a truck through that plot hole