by IJS0904
BRAVO!!! Nicely done. Enjoyed the story from beginning to end. Well thought through and very well written. Thanks for the raging boner!
Hot, but doesn’t ring true. I know it’s fantasy, but the reactions of the characters seem unnatural and forced. Still, it was enjoyable.
That was an amazing sizzling story, somewhat far fetched to reality but then again this scenario could happen somewhere in this mad world-ifso, I want ‘in’!!.
Brilliantly thought out and so well written & edited.
I’d love to read more of the trio’s adventures preferably in book form that I could read on the beach on holiday where I would have a raging hard-on like I have for most of this story.
Loved it, bravo! 👏🏼👏🏼
Very Hot Story - a little awkward in the explanation part, but Beth’s relationship with Lisa and how captivating it was for the crown makes up for it. I’d love for Beth to request more from the club workers. Also, I’d like to know the dom/sub relationship between Beth and Lisa. I think it would be hot if Lisa fucked Ron and Beth couldn’t resist her urge to lick Lisa clean. Perhaps Lisa starts taunting her when she sees Beth staring at her freshly fucked pussy and Beth ends up making herself cum as Lisa sits on (and cums on) her face. I’m getting carried away sorry. Great story as is tho. 😃