by Dinsmore
It's been awhile since one of your stories brightened my day. Glad you shared this one with me, you have a way with words that just flows leaving me rivited to the end. I really hope there are more coming.
I especially liked the proposal on the airplane - very nice.
By the small amount of comments, Readers are missing the boat or plane in this case.<P>
Quality work by a quality guy - thanks Author!<P>
With Very High Regard
OK, so Jim was a little ... uh ... compulsive, a little obsessive, but, man, what a great story. I love a great romance, and this is one of the best. This story deserves recognition at the highest level. Kudos!
This story started so wrong in many ways. He was married with small children. He was also HER BOSS. She grabbed him. Had an affair with him without caring that he was exactly what I previously said. In fact, she coldly calculated having an affair with him. She provoked him until he gave in, and they even had sex in his marital bed. So yes, at the beginning I was quite turned off. But then (years later) it turned into a sweet romance. Who knew? Only a talented author could have made it happen.
Well designed and posted - thank you for making it a pleasure to read a good story about essentially good people - even if they are imperfect -
The fact that they both fled corporate America is the most interesting analysis of the author. Nice that it all worked, but that is the problem of stories in Romance Category!
Dress it up any way you want to but the two main characters in this story are both
cheating dirtbags. 1 star.
Did he cheat?
Yes, on an already dead marriage that only staggered on zombie-like because of small children.
Did she seduce a married man?
Yes.
Did she break a solid marriage?
No.
We're there a few oddities? Definitely. Who buys a ring and carries her soiled panties around for ten years?
Didn't end too soon? Absolutely
But none of that matters. It all comes down to
Happily Ever After
and carrying the torch to the utmost extreme; TK U MLJ LV NV
Beautiful, sweet love story. TRUE LOVE wins over all impossible odds. One of the very best Romance stories I have every read. I'd give it TEN STARS if I could.