All Comments on 'Sheffali's Caravan'

A very good story, thank you for sharing. One thing that interests me are new ideas, technology, plot lines, etc., and you nailed that!

I'd kinda like to see a movie of this. Highly unlikely, but I think it would be a sleeper blockbuster. Fits in nicely within the Jack Danner Universe, which I've just finished binge-reading through "Jack's Moonlighting Part 2." 5/5*

I loved this one!!!

Thank you for sharing

Katzkin

Exceptional.

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Thanks I enjoyed this.

Been over a year since I've had the pleasure of reading this but the score hasn't changed! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thanks.

This is genuinely one of the best reads I have found on this site. Thank you so much!

An absolutely wonderful work of literary art. Thank you for sharing.

Third read and I'll be back again. Great story, characters and setting. 5 stars are too few.

LMJ

Nice little side story in the Tik universe. No connection to any of the characters in Jack's world, but a good tale on its own.

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I love this univers you've created, and am a huge fan of the Tik. Thank you for your creations!

This was an absolutely beautiful piece of work. Thank you for this!

My second read. Sill a fantastic story.

5 happy stars.

Frank