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senilis about 6 years ago

Fascinating

Now this story is getting interesting. Suspense and Technology. What a fascinating approach.

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

Writing and editing is better.

This is a much better written story with far less editing errors. You should see your ratings go up. Great improvement and so far a very captivating story.

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