All Comments on 'Shell Game'

Well played! (...I know. Sorry.)

Fantastic! Good luck winning, you have my vote :)

Tough to read. (And not in the way grammar and spelling-challenged writers make their stories.) Extremely well written and engrossing, but I never quite lost the feeling that all of the characters had issues that made them questionable long-term relationship prospects.

Courtney and Mike remind me of a line from the movie Romantic Comedy: "I'd like to be able to say you two deserve each other, but somehow, I don't think you do."

...and honestly, I fell for it. In my smug egotism, I was convinced I knew how this story was developing.

And oh, I was so very wrong!

Congrats Ironiclonic, for imagineering such a devilishly twisted, psychological piece.

Love to see a follow up on Courtney after Lehman Brothers

I have another Halloween story in mind for her. Possibly this fall.

Will she ever do anything other than outsmart herself? Such a driven girl but not very self aware. But I guess that's about right for her age.

I have read all the stories excluding the series. As usual, I liked the story because of the intelligent writing.

I was a little dissatisfied because there was no scene sex scene for Michelle though arguably the scene provided was definitely adequate.

It was Travis after all. You sir , have a deliciously twisted mind.

Very well done.try loving wives for more incitrful comments

Chilley

Twisted.

5*****

I'm not quite sure about this one but I guess with all the characters it was a big shell game! This was ok, liked your other stories better.

5*

"emission accomplished" I laughed out loud.