All Comments on 'Shelter Ch. 13'

Enjoyed the story.... Thanks

Loved the ending. Unique and so appropriate. Please give us another story soon.

i loved it so much, i wished that it could be longer though. will there be a second part to this story???

i really loved the couple sammi and archie . thanks for the great story.

For multiple interesting multi-layered characters and for managing a story so that we readers cared about them all the way through.

What a wonderfully complex and interwoven story with lots of fascinating well drawn characters, even the minor ones. I had to go back to give 5* to each chapter. Only one slight quibble: the crack by Sammi's ex, "pretty good for a stuck up etc." was jarring and rang false. A smart and sensitive woman like Sammi would never have slept with someone like that even if he had tried to hide his nature. She and her friends would have seen through him before he got close enough to hurt her like that. More attention to her history would have provided an opportunity for even more layers. In my experience, in real life intelligent, educated women are a lot more careful and perceptive than in erotica. They are still not invulnerable to bad experiences, but rarely as crude as that. Thank you so much for an engrossing and satisfying love story.

Sorry. You rate a five for great storytelling and proving once again that erotic doesn't mean "let's get to the sex stuff". Your characters jump off the page as real people with their "good bits" as well as "not so good bits" showing for all to see. Keep writing and I'll keep enjoying.

Your story was heart warming and showed how lost love once again can be found. Your sensitivity of the steps to reach happiness and commitment to love someone forever was well crafted. The conclusion was perfect. The beginning of the cycle of finding the eternal love. Thank you for sharing this. K