All Comments on 'Sheri and Carmen Meet Accidentally'

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idrubloodidrubloodover 11 years ago
Brilliant

Call me biased, but I truly love when characters from different stories are merged in different circumstances. This was wonderful to read, especially the love and trust between Sheri and Julia. And the sweetness of Carmen. Keep up the awesome work AVL and I’m looking forward to your next story.

IDB.

KathyFKathyFover 11 years ago
THANK YOU ! !

It Truly Is Wonderful To Read Of Two Characters From

DifferentStories To Meet In A Seperate Story, But Yet

Relate Back To Their Orginal Stories.

Truly You Have Gifted Us, Your Fans & Admirers With

Another Wonderful Taste Of Your Superb Writting Skill.

Kisses

Kathy

elle_9549elle_9549over 11 years ago

I think it's physically impossible for me to give you anything less than 5 stars. ;) Thank you for this! Sheri is one of my favorite characters EVER, and I have missed her. As long as Julia was okay with this, then so am I. :) It was lovely to see Carmen again too. ~ L

1Martiniman1Martinimanover 11 years ago
Fantastic!

Highly erotic, sexual and sensual story that was extremely well written, but then again, this is what I expect from AVixenLiterally. A must read!

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Awesome

That was an awesome story. I did enjoy the continuation of Carmen , hope u write more about her. Again , awesome read !

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wet

This story made me so wet that iI went down to the bar to see if I could find my on Carman.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
Another winner!

I don't really consider it "infidelity", she spoke to Julia first, and wouldn't have gone on without her ok.

I'd love to read Carmen's story between Michelle and Sheri!

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
Wow !!!!

Another work of art, TOTALLY HOT! A brilliant transition from "A Cougar Totally Turned" and at the same time, paving the way for future installments of "Seducing Carmen Completely" Loved the way Sheri first asked Julia for permission. Two beautiful passionate woman secure in the knowledge of their love for each other. I am pretty sure we all long for a Sheri or Julia in our lives..... I know i do (wink)

SharonsGirlSharonsGirlover 10 years ago
Excellent!

I share views with both idrublood and sbrooks103:

It's cool when characters bridge stories - I see from peeking that Julia puts in an appearance in another short story.

And, yes, it's not really infidelity if your partner approves.

KarenEKarenEabout 10 years ago
Short and very sweet

Nice to know that Julia and Sheri are doing well, looking forward to reading more about them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow!!_That Is Hot!!_Well Done!!!!!

A beautifully written, sexually erotic very sweet story.

Thank You, I loved it!!!

Gay Kat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I'm sorry but breaking an oath (fidelity) with or without consent, hetero or homo, taints the story.

The_WatermanThe_Watermanalmost 8 years ago
To each his/her own...

A fabulous story well told. I have just started reading you, and I intend to continue. Five stars!

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