All Comments on 'She's an Interesting Girl'

Fun girl!

4

A different kind of story, well written. First time at bat and a home run.

Well done!

Would love to have another chapter to this one. Very good for first story, keep writing

Two thumbs up! Everyone is relatable; can be empathized with. Great work!

Thanks, nice story, well written with interesting characters. Please keep going with both this story and your writing

Nice story. well written - very few typos or editing issues.

very sweet!

This is an absolutely wonderful start to what could be a really great longer storyline! I'm definitely interested. Hearing more about her life and family. You can write about Cal and Ro's adventures in sexiness. The dart tournies. Definitely plenty there for a longer story. 5* Please write more.

Enjoyable read. Flowed well. You have left off in a good place to update. Your two main characters fit well together whie being poar opposites. I would enjoy learning more about what make Ro tick.

Wii written a very good read hope you keep writing and post it here

Good story with an interesting heroine. Keep writing, please.

Needs to be a series... Really like the characters and feel there could be more to their relationship.

Great story even better than anyone would expect for a first story. Keep this one going, it is definitely worth persuing!

I agree with "madtowncunilinguist": Good story; well-written -- with very few visible things which could have used more editing (and there are *experienced* writers at this site who leave things in their stories which are noticeable).

(I did seem to notice Cal referring to himself at one point as "the champs" (at darts, at one point), when he would be (well) singular ("the champ").)

Cal and Ro -- as others have noted -- are appealing characters (although the other characters (Steve, Joe, and the not-very-trustworthy Chicago-area girlfriend) are sketchier, and seem to largely be in the story to bring Cal and Ro closer together). (Maybe secondary characters could be more detailed in your next story, "AnotherWriter000".

Thanks for posting this debut.

Ethan/"nycreader".

Great story! It seems flawlessly edited. You’ve created well-developed, likable characters, and started an interesting plot. You can leave the rest to the reader’s imagination, or keep it going, as you choose. I’m not much interested in the BDSM lifestyle, but this taste has me intrigued.

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

I’m all in, don’t let this be your last!!!

Hopefully you will continue this tale and let us know where these lives go next

With all due respect, if your going to write a story that has darts at the forefront of your opening chapter, you need to at least understand the sport. No player attempting to get on a pro league would try and get triple bullseye.

A little far fetched, but a real feel-good story. I enjoyed it and thus: 4*

Fun story told in a great voice...enjoyed it!

Nice story. Good character build up. Maybe a followup story (pls).

5 stars again!

Unique story. I know nothing about darts but you worked the characters well. I read your second story first and had to come back to this. They are so different but well written, without the spelling mistakes, sudden tense changes that are common on Lit.

I liked it. Had a freaky girl once, made me think of her. Enjoyable read.

Two very troubled people, without a real hope for a lasting future. Too depressing!

Great story, enjoyed reading it and enjoyed the characters. Always wanted to meet a freaky loving person like Ro! Keep writing!

Read all three of your stories. You certainly have talent and I enjoy your style. Please keep writing!