All Comments on 'She's Incredible. Or Insane. Ch. 02'

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EloquentmanEloquentmanalmost 7 years ago
Interesting premise if a little short

Perhaps if you added more to the lead up to this then it would have more substance. Also assuming you know what's next, it would make this chapter have greater content, but have 4 ⭐️ as would want to encourage development of this further.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
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A bit short with too much between these short chapters. Though a fun story.

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