All Comments on 'She's My Best Friend's Girl'

This story is full of errors - you need to proof read better!

Also, it moves too quickly.

Don't worry about the comment regarding pace and spelling. Continue, sometimes love making happens when you least expect it and then its like a storm! Especially when its forbidden or most unlikely to happen. Cheers

....how about a story?-pistolpackinpete

awesome story love both thr story and the writing. you reall are one brilliant writer. for get the moron's that only look for mistake so they can look good them selves. i think you are good at what you do another story would be good go for it my love.