All Comments on 'She's Out'

The writing is enthusiastic and colorful, but really confused. The relationships are clear, but that a dominant would out her submissive to her mother in law with no warning or discussion seems very ill-advised and betrays the submissive's trust. Also, I doubt the outcome of Alex's revelation to Phillip would go as smoothly as described. Still, lots of hot sex and obviously fodder for future stories.

The story was fun and oh, so sexy! A few technical problems but overall a nicely done romp. Thanks.

The story was fun and oh, so sexy! A few technical problems but overall a nicely done romp. Thanks.

That is one hot and erotic story, any chances it will be continued?

Amazing - please more

Who is married to Phillip? Theresa or Alex? This could be a decent story if someone would have spent time doing a modicum of EDITING!

Work on your voices!!!

First off, I had no trouble figuring out it's Alex married to Phillip. Theresa is a lesbian domme. Janis is Phillip's mother, Alex's mother-in-law-now sister-sub and Theresa's friend. Some of the flashback transitions were rather abrupt, but the writing was pretty good overall. The only thing that threw me is the big reveal, that is telling Phillip about Theresa, never happens in the context of the story. That makes the story feel unfinished. I am not personally a believer that every story should have a sequel, but every story should resolve its major plot points.