All Comments on 'Shifting Fortunes Ch. 02'

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cantfightfate about 13 years ago

Good start.

I like the characters but I'm not sure Sam should trust Jake just yet. I'm looking forward to more. If the next chapter was a little longer, that would be great!

sexynoisesturnmeon about 13 years ago

I am getting

into your story. I am liking it more and more. Maybe longer chapters?;-) Really good, keep going please:-)

Wolf_girl13 about 13 years ago

intriguing...

i think you have a good story forming here. you are taking the time to develop your characters and their stories. keep up the good work, i'll be looking for more chapters...

MizT about 13 years ago

Enjoying

I'm still enjoying your story. It will be interesting to follow Sam and Jake, I have a feeling that Sam's pursuer is not far behind.

tiger_babe_05 about 13 years ago

Good Story

This is a good story, Can't wait to see where it goes, although it'd be nice if they were a little longer.

little_piggy about 13 years ago

awww

sweet story so far, great characters!

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