All Comments on 'Shimmer In The Sun'

by Pandoras Desire

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
This story was beautiful.

The second person point of view is perfect for a story like this, and the story itself is even better. Really well done!

luvandluckluvandluckover 8 years ago

Good story. Only criticism I have is it could have been longer. That's it though. I loved it otherwise.

Pandoras DesirePandoras Desireover 8 years agoAuthor
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@ luvandluck.. thanks for the comment!!

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