All Comments on 'Shining Girl Ch. 03'

Wow

Can't wait to read more

Oh my God. What more can I say. Outstanding chapter dealing with real life problems and just not fantasy. Waiting for the next chapter and the reunion with the family.

This chapter was as always genius. Altough it was a little diffrent from your other stories ( since the memory loss and stuff ). But it was as always a wonderfull story.

Keep writing BB

was kind of expecting the shooter to be connected to slimy

Chapter 4 will tie up any loose ends, I promise, and I think Jack, Teruko and Slimy Fineman will have one last meeting; if all goes well, Jack and his friends (or maybe just Teruko...) will teach Slimy a lesson he'll never forget (without actually hurting him; I don't do extreme violence, that's another kind of story...), and Jack and Teruko will be able to comb him out of their lives forever.

BB when I first started reading this series I was put off by the way Teruko spoke but the more I've read the more I want. This is one of my favorite series and I hope you continue the series for at least several more chapters. What to me makes you such an excellent writer is that your focus is on telling a story with depth and not making it all about the sex. Even the way you describe the sex scenes doesn't seem repetitive like many other authors. I'm look forward to see more of your work

Great work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

PLEASE post the next one soon!!!!!

Chapter 4 has already been posted, 5 days ago now, so I'm just waiting for it to appear; Laurel reckons 6 - 7 days is the average wait now because of the volume of stories being submitted, so maybe, possibly, hopefully this time tomorrow...

BB1958

The few non abusive cases of incest I met in my life, all had in common that deep sense of REAL decency your characters show! They were not waving their "incestiness" like a banner but were people I would have in my inner circle of friends if I met today and not in my undergrad years, while helping a friend on a thesis study! If the tapes are intact after 25 years hope to be able to someday use some as skeletons for some stories myself.

I love this story. remember my motorcycle accident, I crashed into a car at 70 mph, driving without a helmet. I hit my head against the asphalt and lost my memory for a few hours. It was very distressing to know nothing of what had happened or who I was. And it was only a few hours! I can not imagine what it feels like after 6 months ...

The sex scenes, maybe is a bit excessive, but this is a story in LIT.

As I tell before, I have Japanese family, and every time I read words in Japanese, I keep on smiling.

Now, I go to read again the last chapter (I love the happy ends).

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

don't get me wrong I love this story. I had to keep stopping to wipe the tears out of my eyes. You sure know how to pull the heart strings.

Now to read on and hope for some happy stuff.

Please tell me Slimy didn't get away Scott free, give Slimy the worst possible death ever. You're also right when you said this is the best story you wrote , bye far, another ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ effort . Just one point though. I know this is a sex sight but I feel you need to balance out the sex scenes and the storyline a little better.its getting to the point where I'm skipping over the sex scenes to get to the story. But still a bloody brilliant effort . Well done

BB your certainly winding things up here. I can't remember another of your stories that had so much tension, but saying that I feel a lot of your stories are the best on this site. I have always thought that and this one is proving to be one of the best among them. So another five star production.

This author obviously did his research. His reference to Teruko's anguish and prayers on pg. 1 in her words, " Izanagi and Izanami". Pretty cool though i had to look it up.

So, i Really liked this chapter compared to the first two. I am really liking Harry's and Sai Fong's presence. What i Really liked here is the Lessened sex due to a tragedy. In place of the continuous sex, we saw anguish, tenderness, compassion, empathy, patience and Love. I truly love to read stories showing a balance of all of these when i can find them. Great chapter. 5🌟