All Comments on 'Ship Bound'

I can't think of many Scots who don't know what a dunderhead ((dunderheid) in my part) is and "with" is most often shortened to wi'. However let's not knitpick at a few colloquialisms. The story line is there.

...love story! It's easy to see a long lasting relationship developing between these characters. Very well done! And I'm so happy you've learned you enjoy writing erotica...especially with younger women/older men.

Please write as often as you can ~ it will free your soul! (just kidding) But do write ~ because you're very good at it!

Have a great day, take care,

~Sky~

Serena is seasick and decides to go topside. On the way she runs into a handsome man from Scotland. Gwydion quickly lights her fire and the sexual activities become intensely erotic. Well Written with Scottish dialect yet! Enjoyable Read!

More, please.