All Comments on 'Shipwrecked Family'

Great start! Can't wait until the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!

Fake tits suck. You failed as soon as you have the mom fake tits. Terrible story.

Very enjoyable. Well done

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Great start to the story please continue it.

Great story, got me super hard. Wish I was Will going to fuck his mother and sister. I am throbbing reading this. Keep it going!!

nice!

The family needs to have a sit down discussion of their sexual situation. They admit they all have needs and they need to show their family love by sharing their bodies with their opposite sex. Preg possibility makes it even more hot - who is the daddy, when the baby bumps start to show.

Whole family incest stories are just pathetic. The best stories are either brother/sister or male cousin/female cousin. Keep the rest of the family, friends, etc OUT of the sex part of the story. 1*

It had potential but.....the first night? Zero buildup and they're just accepting thayre all fucking each other?

I liked the story. Continue please and don't give any thought to the people who criticize authors on this site. Most of the have never written a story. Keep up the good work AJC

Loved the story so far! Very erotic!

Looking forward to the next part! Keep up the great work 5*

MistressM

* Ignore any naysayers.. it takes a ton of courage to write a story and put yourself out there!

Great!!! Second page coming soon???

I like it, but things are happening so fast that it seems like it's going to be a short story. I would prefer some buildup and a full story. It excites me so keep up the good work.

Nice beginning. Was hoping for more of a build up but it's your story and I'm waiting for part 2!

awesome

So fucking hot, definitely need a lengthier part 2 though

5 Stars. They are so close to becoming a happy fuck family, can't wait for the next part of the story.

Just fabulous. Good story flow and pacing. A few minor grammar issues, but nothing to detract from the story. Well done. 5*

Tc

Nice try, but too fast and both too large. 9 inch and the son is larger? And then fake tits on top! I’m out!

Great set up for a series. It gives you a lot avenues to explore. I look forward to the next chapter(if there is one!)

Just want to fuck anything that moves need some cock or pussie need to cum soon

Doing great so far. Very promising keep it going please.

Why is it so hard to add a "Ch. 1" to the title?

Asking for a disgruntled friend ...

We all know that someone is going to get pregnant. When dad was fucking his wife, he asks her: "Is it safe to cum in you?" She replied that her birth control should still be active and that she should be safe. So we all know that it is a possibility that mom could get pregnant. Most of the reader, me included, want the son to impregnate her.

And the opposite is true of the father giving his daughter his baby.

Lots and lots of possibilities.

Good for a first time. Some grammar mistakes but know one is perfect. Looking forward to the next part.

HOT !!!, I can't wait for the sequel.

Thank you, i hope chapter 2 coming soon.

So erotic, So Beautiful.

Please continue with more .

A nice start and an erotic situation; could have built up slower, however. Also needs a typo and grammar clean-up. But don't despair, we all start gently!

Looking forward to part 2... nice job.

great story, looking for #2

What about part 2? You promised to continue!

I hope you are going to continue the story. Well written and erotic

Loved the story and look forward to part two

Wowww ... what a great story ... MORE than 5 stars ... So erotic, slow and with words very well picked. Please go on. Can't wait for MORE of your stories to come ... Thanks for sharing ..

short and sweet. good start. is part 2 still cumming?

This needs to be continued. Very well done.