All Comments on 'Shivering Sarah'

And thanks for the hypothermia reminder lesson.

Please give us more tales like this.

What. A beautiful love story. So glad they got their happily ever after!

This story has a great hook, has an interesting twist, well-described characters, very good dialogue both internal and external, good, but over the top sex scenes, and a happy ending.

Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed this story as a whole really!

Difficult to find something different for a Valentine's Day contest but I think you've done it with just enough twists and turns to make it work so well. The ending easy beautiful. Good luck. 5 stars.

Ah, the angst of inter-office relationships! Well written! Happy Valentines Day!

Wow. Just, wow. You are either a woman or you had help. That was the best female character lead story I have read on here. Sweet Jesus.

I know, dear Trionyx, that you don't write fables, and it's never so simple as "The moral of this story is . . ." Once you launch a story, to a certain small extent it is no longer your own. Once the reader gets engaged, the meaning of the story becomes his/her own. To me, the point of this story is that no job is worth sacrificing the happiness of a love relationship.

Another 5 stars.

What a great journey for these two, the love, the sacrifices, but in the end, they found a way to live happily ever after together. Well written with great character development and just enough drama to make it very interesting and enjoyable to read. Well done 5-stars.

You write great stories period. Great characters, interesting situations, you did it again. excellent.

This is the second wonderful love story of yours that I've read. The first, the one on the Pacific Coast Trail, was so terrific that I copied and pasted it in my "word" section so I could read, re-read, re-re-re-read it. You get the idea. This one is almost as good and I gave both five stars. But, if you don't mind me asking, was that one at least partially autobiographic It read like it. At any rate, both are terrific and I look forward to reading more of your stories, with interesting, bright and creative women in them.

Just found your works, and am reading them from oldest to newest. I would make one suggestion. Thoughts of the charters should not be put in double quotes, it can be a bit confusing with normal speech. Personally, I tend to not put them in any kind of quote, or once in a while in single quotes if I feel the need to make them stand out.

May i suggest, that they never broke the rules, as they had met before and fallen in love, before they started working together ….. so no rule was touched or broken ….. but is this rule a rule written down for companies in general in the US? So is this rule truly exists? ….. if so, im speechless, as in violating simple social being happenings - love is happen, fact

Lovely happy ending and great tale ten valentine hearts 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🌟🍀

I loved this.

You are a wonderful writer, thank you for the gifts of your stories.