All Comments on 'Shokushu-ju'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

This was fucking hot! More please

Cutty4637Cutty4637almost 4 years ago

Didn't know what to expect. Quite surprised. Really enjoyed. More would be nice.

steeleye11steeleye11almost 4 years ago
good story, great writing

Interesting story and well done. The japanese language and the try on classifying the 'monster' added to immersion in my opinion. Only found one typo (breathe) which is extraordinary!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great!!

Great story!!! Would love for you to continue the story!!!

toolbox0toolbox0almost 4 years ago
Hilarious and erotic

Very rare to find an immersive, funny, and well thought out story like this. Looking forward to similar work in the future.

ModsognirModsogniralmost 4 years ago

This was an incredibly fun story. Thank you very much for writing it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Brilliant! Really good story. Lot's of fun and lots of cum!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I liked this story & keep up the good work.

tlanuwa1963tlanuwa19638 months ago

That was hot. Do more.

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I'm sorry I finished and submitted the latest Spark story so close to the Geek Pride deadline that it was delayed and missed the 25th. However, it is now published. I hope those who have been enjoying the series continue to do so with this latest offering. *~*~*~*~* I keep fo...