All Comments on 'Sholan Alliance - AU Bk. 02 Ch. 06'

Enough with the hugging and descriptions of everyday life. Where is the story going?

Take note (again), people wear CLOTHES not cloths. "Cloths" is the plural form of cloth which is a piece of fabric.

I am too bored with this to bother reading any more installments

Story a little slow but its good so far keep writing and don't let others swing your storyline

Great characters, exciting action and intrigue. Please continue. Thanks

The story is starting to feel as though you are pairing characters up just so you can put a sex scene in every chapter. I would rather see more plot development.

Enough of the character hugging and making sexual remarks its fucking boring , y dont you do yourself a favour and contonue with the fucking story line, its getting to the point where i just skippingto the next page cause im soooo over all this cuddling crap.

When the Ambassador goes to dinner on page 2 her name changes from Teolurun to Ceolurun.