by Turbidus
Hi Turbidus - I am really enjoying this new story parts 1-4 knit together beautifully. The sharp reparte is delightful. Please don't make me wait too long for part 5. Thank you. Subdued
Even though there was no sex it was a really important ch. Now I understand the characters better and want to root for them now. Can't wait for #5 also, Matt is hilarious
I don't know what I expected after the Liam cliffhanger, but that wasn't it. And it was fucking awesome. Great characters, great dialogue.
“I contemplated opening the door and jumping. It looks easy enough in the movies.“
You’re funny! Great chapter