All Comments on 'Shooting Matt Ch. 04'

by Turbidus

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well this is hot!

Hi Turbidus - I am really enjoying this new story parts 1-4 knit together beautifully. The sharp reparte is delightful. Please don't make me wait too long for part 5. Thank you. Subdued

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
This was a great chapter

Even though there was no sex it was a really important ch. Now I understand the characters better and want to root for them now. Can't wait for #5 also, Matt is hilarious

geemeedeegeemeedeeover 7 years ago

I don't know what I expected after the Liam cliffhanger, but that wasn't it. And it was fucking awesome. Great characters, great dialogue.

MrsgnomieMrsgnomieabout 6 years ago

“I contemplated opening the door and jumping. It looks easy enough in the movies.“

You’re funny! Great chapter

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous