All Comments on 'Shooting Matt Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It keeps getting better

Thank you... . I love it.....it shouldn't always be about sex. .....i love reading a good story. ....pls keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Whee!

Wow, I hope Matt will be ok, I'm worried about him and his athletic career. On the other hand: WOW IT'S LEON and he's still looking out for Randy! On the OTHER other hand: OMG poor Glenna! She thought they'd got some kind of equilibrium and they don't! Overall I definitely feel like Matt's better off with Liam than with Randy, not just because of age but because they're more relaxed with each other... but wow. This is just all so emotional I barely know what to do with myself... but it's great writing! Thank you for such great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well....

Things just got hella awkward.... I hope Matt will be ok. There are a lot of truths to face I suppose. Lee, Glenna and Randy should just all be happy together.. I'm half joking about that..

It started out iffy, but I like how Matt and Liam are coming together. There's things to face there too.

I can't wait to see how it all resolves..

Good job..

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More please

I am rooting for Randy in this one, not sure why. That being said, I forsee a threesome with Randy, Matt and Leon before this story is over.

koiezLGMkoiezLGMover 7 years ago
hey

it's been too long since we heard from you my friend, please give us something

TurbidusTurbidusover 7 years agoAuthor
My apologies

I am sorry to have left Randy, Matt and Liam in limbo. Life, the election and the holidays have all conspired to keep me occupied.

I hope to get back to the gang soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
i knew randy would come flying in

im really enojjoying this and the different perspectives,emotions and background of each of these chaaracters. Its not unbelievable that there are connections here, connecting all these characters together SP

jakeontheboxjakeontheboxabout 5 years ago

loving this story. i'm the weirdo that wants stuff like this so you care about the characters.

RobJasperRobJasperover 4 years ago
Great story lines!

Much as I love all the terrific hot sex scenes, I have to admit I am caught up in the story lines as well. Wonderful writing! Thank you!

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Life got awfully busy for a time. I hope to add a few stories again.

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