All Comments on 'Shooting Matt Ch. 19'

I love this story so much.

I appreciate that very much.

Really liking the story! Wondering how many more people are going to be thrown in the mix though? I like stories that branch out and include others storylines but after awhile it gets too much. Which is more about my preference of stories than your still s as a writer. You write so well and manage to weave them in very nicely. Excited for more

I have the same concern. I have a habit of letting the story take control. It's time to start tying up some of the loose ends. Thanks for the feedback.

Your stories are so well written with so much intrigue as to where your next paragraph is going to lead us to. Physical, spiritual, sexual, mental or whatever, One moment there is joy, laughter, sadness, tears, regret, yearning, orgasms, trepidation, Adrenalin highs, dreaming and it all boils down to love and romance. A good novel doesn't have to end when you think it is time, a good novel ends when there is no more story to tell. Most authors feel it best to end and produce new stories, Not necessarily so. With your interweaving story lines, there are still some very good chapters for you to write in order to keep us wanting more and reading more. thank you