All Comments on 'Shooting Matt Ch. 21'

The moment I saw that you had a new chapter, I had to read it,even though it was close to midnight, You pulled me in as though I had just read the chapter before with no time spacing it out. I beg that you don't finish the story too soon as this chapter seems to be a "coming to end the story" chapter. You write with ease, detail, caring, loving, spiritual love, I don't want it to end and I am already becoming sad that it is going to end soon. Thank you

I love this story. The writing is great but the story is starting to drag a bit. I'm waiting for a big climax or conclusion or something. I will keep reading until the end though just wanted to share my thought

Anonymous, I don't take that as rude at all. I've been wondering how to get more drama back into the story. Some of the threads do need to be tied off before the whole thing unravels.