by DrThrob
Can't wait to read what happens next
A nice story. Good use of the English language, which is great. I don't get how this gets filed under the "Incest/Taboo" category except for a couple of sentences, but not a big problem. Thanks for sharing your work!
no incest and totally unrealistic but not bad. would have been better in the erotic couples area maybe.
Where's the incest?
And 11 people in a car with no seatbelts is just plain unsafe. For shame.