All Comments on 'Short: Relaxing Bath with Mom'

Part 2? They move to bed, he starts to kiss and caress her body, lick her pussy, ass and clit until his mom get an orgasm, then Lisa takes her sons cock in her mouth, sucking him, then she will get on top of her son and ride them to a great orgasm, she wants to be sure that she is pregnant.

While the story was to short it was extremely well written. 5🌟

No room in the tub for what they were doing, without sloshing water everywhere.

I liked “forbidden family fuck” as nice alliteration but then your writing took a nosedive. “The mother’s cunt” “the son’s cock” — why did you deviate from letting your two characters feel and express their joy?

Also, this was a curious story from the beginning. A mother asks her son to take a bath with her — not too likely to happen. But if you had delved into why she felt compelled to invite him, that could have been fun to write.

You mentioned impregnating sperm. I realize there is a fascination for some of getting Mom knocked up again, but really how many women want to start a second family in their 40s? Let them enjoy making love or fucking without the fear of the morning after.

Finally, there’s little description of what either character looks like. No definitive ages.

No problem giving this story a (5) rating as I will explain at the end. However, I would say a more realistic, or (believable sounding) introduction is probably needed. The author rather quickly seems to throw the readers into the shower along with Sam and his mother. This is done a bit premature and before providing a (very realistic sounding) reason why it's happening. The ("Come on, Sam. You look so tired. A warm bath will do you good,") statement is not likely to ever happen in real life. Yes, this is fiction but the more believable it sounds, the more readers will want to see and search for other stories by this author.

However,

"Sam nodded in acceptance, his heart pounding louder with each passing second. (the physical response and heart rate increase is realistic and is very good). He followed his mother to the bathroom and observed her filling the tub with warm water. The steamy air and the sweet aroma of lavender oil infused his senses.

Without any hesitation, Lisa began to undress, pulling her blouse over her head and undoing her bra. Sam couldn't help but stare at her modest breasts, incredibly perky for her age, their curves and soft flesh calling to him. (a very realistic and age appropriate mom description)

She stepped out of her loose sweatpants, and then her panties, revealing a dark bush. (very appropriately realistic, mom is appropriately for her age, not shaved) Sam told himself that this was normal, his mind repeating his mother's words: "We're family."

Finally, "The mother's cunt tightened in organismic spasms around the son's cock, which in response started to ejaculate rays of vigorous sperm with a tremendous force,"

The author of this story does two things extremely well. First, the author described the mother in such a way, she sounded quite real (the tits and her pubic hair descriptions sound accurate / age appropriate for a mother) story. Second, both characters to become pleasured from the sexual encounter and not just one of them. Also, the son's cock. Possibly needed detailed slightly more. Her son was (long, thick, throbbing, man bush, trimmed man bush). Overall, the mom who realistically and appropriately had pussy hair in place and realistic sounding tits, is what got the author the 5 rating. This mom, like many moms is most possibly a homemaker who, cooks cleans, does dishes, does laundry, does the shopping, and runs all the family the errands from the mail to paying bills. It's not even realistic to think mom (40's) is going to be shaved perfectly smooth as if she is 19. Good job and very realistic descriptions of mom!!! Readers need more stories like this one with descriptions of mom who sound just as real as this one did. Realistic tits, and the mom is appropriately, either neatly trimmed, barely trimmed, hairy, very hairy, or she has an untrimmed monster-bush spilling our of her panties (top and sides)! Save the shaved pussy stories for family beach trips. Like when the sexy daughter in law needs to help the still attractive and tan 43 year old mom to shave her bikini line. Shaved because the daughter in law brought her 23 year old just divorced brother along. And yea, I suppose a foursome with the 22 year old husband, his wife, her brother, his mother, at about the fourth chapter of their beach trip story - would make for a nice side trip.

I was pleased with this story. Additionally, I became persuaded to want to look at more stories by this author and I will when I get time. I am hoping this author is going to be similar to other authors who write mom -- son stories. Similar, because at least in this story, the author put some HAIR on mom's pussy! That is always a major (YESSSS) in stories about older ladies (mom's, mothers-in-law, aunts, landlords, and neighbor ladies) who are not going to be 18-26 and shaved bald for a bikini by the pool event. Shaved pussies are good, very good, but mom stories? Mom's are, 40--to --50 years old, with sexy erect often throbbing clits hiding usually just inside the dense forest.

Five ((5)) STARS, for a nice story about a sexy mom who is obviously in possession of a "HAIRY PUSSY." In the next chapter or six. Possibly this sexy mom with pussy hair will need to go on a trip to ____ because of ____ and the only person who available to help her make the 7-hour drive to _____ is her son's sexy girlfriend. It's an overnight trip and a hotel with a pool. "OMG ____," ___ said while laughing as she undressed, "My big hairy bush. I better wear some shorts down to the pool. I don't want scare anyone." "Shit ___, you call that a bush. "Take a look at..." ____paused, "Hell, you can't even see my cunt lips because of it. ___ doesn't like for me to trim it." ____ sounds a lot like ____. ___ wants my mound untouched, he even likes for my inner thighs to stay hairy. "Well, I have to admit, yours does look nicer than mine. Thicker and I love that light toffee colored hair on your mound." "Well, it does hide my cunt lips pretty good." So, do they really grow as you age, clits I mean?" "____, the more they get sucked on, the bigger they get." "____ licks mine a lot but he doesn't really suck on it," Promise me you won't tell anyone, I will show you how to have squirt orgasm after the pool. "Yea, we should both be clean enough then." "Both," does that mean you might want to taste of mine too?" "Since I met you!"

I can only give you a 3, the pre - amble to the bath should've been more descriptive with her underwear?

Wearing silk/satin boy shorts and suspender belt nylons to give him a HARD on up front, I guess i am saying is more content

sporting one.

I'll be blunt. Not enough context, no story, nothing about the characters.

Extremely sexy but much too short.

can't see who is where and how what is done!

Short, sweet, and to the point. Most importantly, it was fucking hot.

Having read this and an earlier story of yours, I have a suggestion that I hope you will take to heart. Before you send in a story, please print out a hard copy and read it aloud to yourself or someone else. I think it will help with context and structure as well l as spelling errors and use of incorrect words.

Nothing better than double mother/son love.

No room in the tub? what a foolish concept to focus on. No details were given about size of tub nor water level. Just enjoy a good story and quit trying to be a bellend.

Short and Sweet!!!

There's nothing wrong with a mother caring for her son." Understandong mom like Lisa help sons in different ways, For many a show of tits and HJ make son satisfied

Lame. An eighth grader would have more imagination than this pulp

great quickie. ty