All Comments on 'Short Shorts Ch. 04'

one of the best sex stories i've read

Lindsey sure caught herself a nice man with those shorts! Looking forward to learning more about him.

Beautiful Selenakittyn, thanks for another super story full of delightful surprises. One suggestion I have is that you mention, the next time you have a girl lying on the bonnet (engine hood) of a car, because you had one on chilly Cherry Hill too, a girl getting pumped with starlight in her very core, and especially if you have her draped, face down, that the engine cover will be deliciously warm on a cool night for somebody completely- or mainly-naked. The contrast between the warmth of the man for her or the woman for him, the cold air and the stirring additional warmth and oily fragrance of a magnificent machine can be very moving for both and if the lady perceives the machine as having masculine power, she might put her arms around it entirely, say: as though it is a solar system, while she is being filled, even more significantly, as I said, with starlight. I am glad you had Lindsay flying with the jets. Perhaps she had her arms around one or was feeling that she could give birth to one or have an experience of parturition in reverse :) Just a man's oily perspective, Selenakittyn. Thanks a million (stars) Lance.

You're a very talented writer are these all of your stories or do you have more?

I couldn't leave the bloody pc 'til I'd read all 4 chapters. Now I'm gonna have to read all your stories, damn it!

Love your writing, it's as horny as hell!!

Looking for the rest of SHORT SHORTS?

It's now titled "Falling Down" and you can find it at excessica (www.excessica.com).

Enjoy!

Please finish! i love this story

It can't be over please continue the story!

Cruel and unusual punishment. We deserve better. How could you? Well it was very good....what little we got.

"... the rest of SHORT SHORTS?

It's now titled "Falling Down" and you can find it at excessica (www.excessica.com).

Enjoy! - Selena_Kitt©"

Now, is this fair? You seek to draw us after you to another site. I'm afraid I'm not quite that quick to jump, sweet kitty. I enjoy what you leave us with and am satisfied with that. Ta ta.

An F-16 is one hell of a big vibrator! Lindsey needs her sex and for once the U.S.Navy man is going slow about putting his cock in a woman!He did give her pussy and clit a giant long orgasm!Lindsey is 18. I'm surprised her stepdad is so strict.I believe her mom is jealous!Selena writes the hottest sex and bondage stories!!!

Continue

Loved it! Please more!

for just nuther worthless, terrible, couldn't read slut tale

Chapter 5???

please post ch. 5!

Wowser ! And I thought this series couldn’t get any hotter. How wrong I was. I think I took one breath and held it the whole time they were at the airport. You have some serious chops as a writer. Your sex scenes are to die for. The dialog, while sparse, is every bit what it needs to be. Her attitude is somewhat what you’d expect from an 18 year old girl, although she’s one of the horniest ones and isn’t afraid to express herself. The story line just keeps getting better and more exciting. Your writing is exceptional !!

5-😊😊😊😊😊’s with enthusiasm !

I've penalised you one star because it didn't follow through.