All Comments on 'Short Story 01: Mom Son Lust'

Writing's not your thing, you're bowling googles. Stick to the cricket.

I closed it after the first line. "This is a shot story." I knew it could only go downhill from there.

Wonderful story from one that is not accustomed to English literature.

Good attempt and, with practice and tutelage improvement is bound to come.

Please continue to offer stories, this will help you improve,

Do some impregnation stories

you were doing doggie and that means your dick was in her, but think about it, you were licking her ass at the same time? even with an eight inch cock like mine i can not fuck a woman and still be able to lick her ass. not even a yoga master can do that

Ok so wait. You were fucking her and licking her ass at the same time? I think there’s a logistics problem here.

Terrible grammar and syntax. How old are you, 9?