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Jack Daniels is NOT Bourbon, it is Tennessee Whiskey. They are 2 different things!

Even if it's completely unrealistic. I'm willing to suspend some disbelief, but the idea of pouring 40 percent alcohol on my partner's intimate areas makes me cringe. Ever tried to use alcohol based shaving cream on that area? Lots of discomfort. Also, the alcohol would reduce the effect of any natural lubricants, in addition to evaporating saliva, making anal sex even drier. I shudder to think of the discomfort involved with trying dry anal sex as a first time event.

I enjoyed this story, but you may want to work on the idea a bit. Finally, your conversational grammar needs a lot of work.