by london_james2010
I don't know what those readers were expecting. Reading from a woman's perspective is exciting. I think if my wife weren't so afraid of the ramifications of it that she would like a scene like this. She is into MM romances and talks about it often. So far it's just a fantasy.
Many women want to see men together. It is easier to get guys to do than most think. Once guy has done it woman has better relationship.
Good idea for a story, but the misspelled and misused words are distracting, as are the frequent punctuation errors.