All Comments on 'Show & Tell Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

I am a wee bit jealous of Gramps...

...in that I have no grandchildren, (and I don't expect ever to have any) but if I did, and one of them needed me to attend parent-teachers' night, I don't think I could control myself as well as this Gentleman did. I don't think teacher is going to to relent with her teasing ways, though!

Athlantian about 7 years ago

Loved it

Even without any sex in it, you write very well and I enjoyed reading it :)

DadDavis over 7 years ago

And

There is more story to come. Don't leave this one with just one chapter. There has to be more.

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