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CorjixCorjixover 4 years ago
Nice

I was right there with you...the way you pulled the reader in. Make it even better by staying with one tense per sentence; and thought. "5" "Favorite Story" Gotta go rub one out...Right Now!!! (Thanks)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Beautiful story.

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