All Comments on 'Show Me?'

Very poor no story no build up and no sex

1 star

That was super hot! I would have liked a little progression in her thoughts, since she went from "no way is sex happening tonight"--even stopping the excellent kissing--to convincing him to stay in order to have sex.

Just read your newest story and decided to come over here to see what else you've been up to. Really, really good! You seem to have found yourself a niche you're comfortable with, and a surprising amount of variety in that niche to boot. Very much looking forward to future stories.

Also, the "no story no buildup and no sex - one star"-comment reminded me a lot of the famous amazon one for Wolf of Wallstreet: "There were no wolves in the movie" (one star). The funniest shit :D

A very good story told in vivid descriptive detail.

And all is right with the world.

Delightful. Thanks.

Liked the story and yes I did find sex unlike Mr./Ms. Anonymous. Lots of ways to provide incentive for a female orgasm not just a dick or tongue and I am told they are enjoyed if not totally satisfying.

5 stars Keep writing!

Cheers

SAGE

P.S: You have achieved the SAGE follow list! I don't want to miss any future "MakeMeSay" posts!